
TOWIE CHIC
âWell, hereâs to being eighteen!â Serena declared as she and Patience clinked glasses, both of them laughing.
The two best friends had pushed back the white Venetian blinds and were perched on the window seat in Serenaâs luxurious apartment. Her room was airy and spacious, pink gleaming paint on the walls and a thick cream carpet warming their feet. A king sized bed took up at least half of the room, yet the girls had still managed to fit a TV, dance mat, sofa and table of food and alcohol into the corner.
âAnd let it be a lot better then being seventeenâ Patience murmured back, looking out to the wonderful view of the beach; calm and serene water, white grains of sand and fresh open air.
âHell to yes!â Jodie shouted as she danced to the music, her arms and legs flailing wildly.
They were all spread around the house, Millie and Callie downstairs watching movies on the big screen, Rosalie and Karina sprawled on the bed, going through every boy in their contacts and ringing them in turn and Keira, Juliet and Leigh were watching Jodie.
Patience smiled as she wiped the tear that trickled down her cheek, Serena saw it but pretended not to as she got up and walked over to the gilded mirror on the opposite side of the room, admiring her reflection in the glass and smiling.
Everyone was happy and she looked great, things did have a happy ending after all.
Please rate and offer any improvements. Please no mean comments!
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Well, reading this out of context does you no favors, I must say. However, it's an ok ending, not the greatest, but then, I can't judge how well you ended it as I don't know the characters or the plot. I don't think a bunch of girls would end up that rich at the age of eighteen in real life, unless they were born into wealth, and if they were born into wealth, why the quote "Things did have a happy ending after all?" If they were wealthy, their lives wouldn't have any sad parts in them until after they left home, as the parents would definitely spoil them.
If, however, you are looking for just a "good" or "bad" response, i'd say good, as I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors. The plot doesn't hold a dime up to grammar in my opinion, so I'll say, it's a good ending, as far as I can know.
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Well, reading this out of context does you no favors, I must say. However, it's an ok ending, not the greatest, but then, I can't judge how well you ended it as I don't know the characters or the plot. I don't think a bunch of girls would end up that rich at the age of eighteen in real life, unless they were born into wealth, and if they were born into wealth, why the quote "Things did have a happy ending after all?" If they were wealthy, their lives wouldn't have any sad parts in them until after they left home, as the parents would definitely spoil them.
If, however, you are looking for just a "good" or "bad" response, i'd say good, as I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors. The plot doesn't hold a dime up to grammar in my opinion, so I'll say, it's a good ending, as far as I can know.
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is there a nice nearby beach to visit by just taking the subway/ train from manhattan NY ? directions?

sharad_wac
Nice summer beach to relax, and escape from manhattan - yet quite accessible by subway / train
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Ok, there is a special deal on the Long Island Rail Road going to Long Beach. I'm not sure of the time table and the cost, but you can call the railroad or check on line. I used to use it before I had a car and house in the country. You take the train directly to Long Beach, I believe it was a straight ride and they let you out near the beach and you walk about a block or two to the sandy beach.
Other than that you can take the train, sorry can't remember which train, think it's the D, you go all the way to the end to Brighton Beach and be at the front of the train, and get out and you will be a block off of the beach. You want to go to the front part of the beach, it's the safest part, and the beach is safe. Bring your own chair for both places and towel and something to drink. Brighton Beach, no schedule as you are going on a subway.
Also, you can take a little longer trip and head for a day trip to fire Island. Take the Long Island railroad going to Atlantik (sp), it is a free beach, no homes. You can use the beach without anyone bothering you. actually you can use any of the beaches as they are all actually free beaches. It's just the home areas you can't use. Take the train out to probably Babylon and then you get a bus to the ferry, the ferry takes you across to the island and you can walk to the beach.
You can rent a car and head out to the Hamptons, but a lot of traffic. Also with a car you can go to the Jersey shore. I think there may be buses to the Jersey shore.
There are a lot of places to head to in the summer.
Also there is Reiis Park, but to be honest I'm not sure how to get there. It's a very nice beach. I haven't been there for awhile, but I remember liking it very much.
If you don't want to leave the city, there is a free pool, not crowded in the week, but crowded on weekends. John Jay Pool. It's on I think 77th Street and I believe York. All you need is a lock for your locker. Do not bring money with you and bring a plastic bag. Sometimes they let you bring a plastic bag in sometimes they don't. just bring your towel, suntan lotion and maybe a book, that's it. There are a lot of police around to make sure there are no problems at the pool. I used it for years until I recently moved into a building with a pool.
Well, I guess that should about cover it. I've given you all the things I can think of.
Ok, there is a special deal on the Long Island Rail Road going to Long Beach. I'm not sure of the time table and the cost, but you can call the railroad or check on line. I used to use it before I had a car and house in the country. You take the train directly to Long Beach, I believe it was a straight ride and they let you out near the beach and you walk about a block or two to the sandy beach.
Other than that you can take the train, sorry can't remember which train, think it's the D, you go all the way to the end to Brighton Beach and be at the front of the train, and get out and you will be a block off of the beach. You want to go to the front part of the beach, it's the safest part, and the beach is safe. Bring your own chair for both places and towel and something to drink. Brighton Beach, no schedule as you are going on a subway.
Also, you can take a little longer trip and head for a day trip to fire Island. Take the Long Island railroad going to Atlantik (sp), it is a free beach, no homes. You can use the beach without anyone bothering you. actually you can use any of the beaches as they are all actually free beaches. It's just the home areas you can't use. Take the train out to probably Babylon and then you get a bus to the ferry, the ferry takes you across to the island and you can walk to the beach.
You can rent a car and head out to the Hamptons, but a lot of traffic. Also with a car you can go to the Jersey shore. I think there may be buses to the Jersey shore.
There are a lot of places to head to in the summer.
Also there is Reiis Park, but to be honest I'm not sure how to get there. It's a very nice beach. I haven't been there for awhile, but I remember liking it very much.
If you don't want to leave the city, there is a free pool, not crowded in the week, but crowded on weekends. John Jay Pool. It's on I think 77th Street and I believe York. All you need is a lock for your locker. Do not bring money with you and bring a plastic bag. Sometimes they let you bring a plastic bag in sometimes they don't. just bring your towel, suntan lotion and maybe a book, that's it. There are a lot of police around to make sure there are no problems at the pool. I used it for years until I recently moved into a building with a pool.
Well, I guess that should about cover it. I've given you all the things I can think of.
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